Saturday, November 21, 2009

unapproachable


my pixels embellished for free
with Peruvian ornamentation
in hindsight gives me the willies.
Not because of the steaming coffee cup
or the llama or the menacing toothy
grin or piranha swarming.
It's not the stone wall terracing,
not the blood soaked steps
of looming temples.
Jaguars, verdant canyon rapids,
the ponchos, cushma
and petticoats.
Perhaps the endless chain
of mountains or the volcanoes
that whisper to the clouds,
but no, it is the color
of the countryside,
of the flora and the fauna
and the people and their dress.
It is faces,
in the smiles.
It is mine to see, to touch
to behold, but to have it
is to walk on the moon
and is chilling and
not advised for any
beyond those dwelling
in the areas between--a
subcutanian mist driven
abode inneroutside the realm
of fear or elation.
Beware the graft and
Machu Picchu receptor
plug downloads, cilia
enhancements, as the
rampant dendrite
despoiler shall
encumber
and will
shut
you
up
.

13 comments:

ArtSparker said...

This rose has thorns.

ArtSparker said...

Or do I mean follicles?

Mike said...

As I see it, we have two choices here:

1). You are a genius and I just don't understand.
2). I am a total fool!

LOL!

Tom said...

otin, there must be a third option...the way i see, poetry is open to interpretation, and either you like it or not...hope you like it!

thanks for stopping in!

Candie said...

Ah Otin said about the same thing than I said at first bout you being a genius.I really like that one,there's something more about that one,something anapproachable?

Candie said...

Yes I really like it!

Tess Kincaid said...

I love to say Machu Picchu out loud.

Hey, I'm wearing a Peruvian coat in my post today. Synchronicity.

Brian Miller said...

yeah, i got a virus once myself, watch those downloads...

happy saturday tom!

Lisa Ursu said...

Willow's comment made LAUGH!
"It is faces,
in the smiles."
I really love that, and this piece.
Thanks for sharing.
Enjoy your SUNday.

SG said...

Hallucination, was it?

Reya Mellicker said...

Otin? He's a genius. Perhaps an evil genius, but a genius, nonetheless.

Have a great Thanksgiving, Tom!!

Tom said...

hey! i'm not evil...not totally very incredibly evil.

Anonymous said...

I liked it! Then again I don't much follow a set pattern( or do I? ) Let's ask Dino-hand what he thinks...or not, heh, heh!