
...where we left off:
Falling,
I reach-ed out
felt vainly to the rail,
tho the banister was absent-
oh woe!
I reach-ed out
felt vainly to the rail,
tho the banister was absent-
oh woe!
...& now:
Tumble
from the landing
turned downside up I bounced
equilibrium in a funk,
I gasp.
Now I
am beginning
to fear for my own life
reaching the bottom of the stair
Up top
holding his sides
my shadow's belly laugh
fills the well until the sunbeam
subsides.
Again
the curtain parts
sending my ill shadow
back to my aching prostate form,
benign.
Get up
from creaking boards
the door is just in sight,
my Nostrodomic enlarger
implodes!
Aha!
a voice peals out
as a sharp steeple bell;
'beware' intones the threatening
menace.
Beware,
and so I do
to make for the front door
which stands ajar for reaching there;
it slams.
The end
of the horror
it seems is not to be,
but it's only the beginning,
you see!

23 comments:
You should do a newspaper comic strip! I really love your drawings!
oh the horror. really good...like this one...exploding things, slamming doors, laughing shadows...
Nostrodomic enlarger??!
I think of Silverstein when I come here (which you've probably heard before). These are awesome.
Love the house and ghosties! And your Nostrodomic enlarger's warrantee ran out, hence the implosion-GAH! I hate when that happens!
And JeffScape's spot on about Silverstein...
Oh brilliant- thank you for the continuation!- but it looks like there is more....
That was great Tom!
I really like the what you write... in a holistic way. Meaning, it all clicks together at the end. Until then, I'm wondering.
Damn those shitty shadows, they'll be the death of you step tumbling Thomases. I love your drawings too, I just wish I understood your poems!
I love it!!!
Howl's Moving Castle! :)
This is wonderfully surreal.
Love the take on this! And you really ARE the king of doodles!
"oh woe!" "equilibrium in a funk"
Yeah! That is is so good.
5 cans of corn out of 5.
amazing--very funny and I agre with Otin--get those drawings to a newspaper near you at once!! best-c
Great post once again lol
xoxo
Your drawings are wonderful. Great post.
...ouch...
Fun stuff!
Is this finished? I think there will be more!
LOVE the drawings...what a crash!
Great drawing, Reminds me of the Nightmare before Christmas drawings. Happy TT
Nostrodomic enlarger exploding - wouldn't wish that on anyone!
Fun and ouchie all at once! The drawings are fabu! Oh, and I do agree with JeffScape about the Silverstein-esque quality to your work.
Words To Slide Down Banisters With.A Great Ride!
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