
Tripping overt the glass menagerie
she caught hell in the terrapin tank.
A man size tun/a red goatee
a throaty serenade of sweaty obscenities,
interpretive fixtures of
monolithic faux corals
teeming with feudal morays
in epic stare contests
who scrabble for the
leftover bonbon cheeses
to initiate dogfight dive and
stalling maneuvers
so for too
grab the goods and go
to town.
Prearranged, the oversight
oxidation committee is out to lunch
and two bits shy of a full roll.
Finally a low tolerance scrum
welled up over the
Mackerel contingent
and stirred a heated
brubbling broil
to a crab celebratorial
bazfaz dip
and how!
Oh look, the snails are converging.
she caught hell in the terrapin tank.
A man size tun/a red goatee
a throaty serenade of sweaty obscenities,
interpretive fixtures of
monolithic faux corals
teeming with feudal morays
in epic stare contests
who scrabble for the
leftover bonbon cheeses
to initiate dogfight dive and
stalling maneuvers
so for too
grab the goods and go
to town.
Prearranged, the oversight
oxidation committee is out to lunch
and two bits shy of a full roll.
Finally a low tolerance scrum
welled up over the
Mackerel contingent
and stirred a heated
brubbling broil
to a crab celebratorial
bazfaz dip
and how!
Oh look, the snails are converging.
11 comments:
Now I ken why Princess's Mum dinna buy her a another fishie...
And th' snails...back! Back I say! Where's me salt shaker? ( evil grin )...
ah Subby...'tis a fishy story you tell.
Weel Tom, I ken ev'r time she gets ane, it dinna seem t' last...
Sorry, I've been reading Barrie and the Scotch-English is stickin'...
uh, Todd...I might need to use you as an dialect expert for a future story...
but for now i don't unnerstan a freakin' word you say!
you been eatin da bad fish agin!
but it expanded outward for me, to the restaurant floor itself. you are a weird and wonderful writer, Tom.
xo
erin
snails...its lunch time already?
my goatee (beard) is going white...wish it was red. smiles.
Tom, good thin' I wasn't usin' Middle English, wot? ( grabs Chaucer book... )
I'm translating as I go ( the Barrie book ). Not an easy book to read, mind you...
WV=fooment...?
I liked this line: a throaty serenade of sweaty obscenities,
throaty serenade, sweat and obscenities all at once--I wouldn't think to put these words together in a million years. And you do that every time you write. Unexpected words right next to each other :).
Oh, man...
I need to know what a "bazfaz" is!
'bazz fazz' came from the old Pogo comic strips...sort of a mild expletive....so there...kind of out of context, but kindof not?
thanx y'all. 'appy Sunday!
Bazfaz dip? Sounds like a ballroom dancing manouvre. Snails keep the class clean!
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