Sunday, April 11, 2010

binocularing the fishbowl


Tripping overt the glass menagerie
she caught hell in the terrapin tank.
A man size tun/a red goatee
a throaty serenade of sweaty obscenities,
interpretive fixtures of
monolithic faux corals
teeming with feudal morays
in epic stare contests
who scrabble for the
leftover bonbon cheeses
to initiate dogfight dive and
stalling maneuvers
so for too
grab the goods and go
to town.
Prearranged, the oversight
oxidation committee is out to lunch
and two bits shy of a full roll.
Finally a low tolerance scrum
welled up over the
Mackerel contingent
and stirred a heated
brubbling broil
to a crab celebratorial
bazfaz dip
and how!
Oh look, the snails are converging.

11 comments:

Subby said...

Now I ken why Princess's Mum dinna buy her a another fishie...

And th' snails...back! Back I say! Where's me salt shaker? ( evil grin )...

Tom said...

ah Subby...'tis a fishy story you tell.

Subby said...

Weel Tom, I ken ev'r time she gets ane, it dinna seem t' last...

Sorry, I've been reading Barrie and the Scotch-English is stickin'...

Tom said...

uh, Todd...I might need to use you as an dialect expert for a future story...
but for now i don't unnerstan a freakin' word you say!

Woman in a Window said...

you been eatin da bad fish agin!

but it expanded outward for me, to the restaurant floor itself. you are a weird and wonderful writer, Tom.

xo
erin

Brian Miller said...

snails...its lunch time already?
my goatee (beard) is going white...wish it was red. smiles.

Subby said...

Tom, good thin' I wasn't usin' Middle English, wot? ( grabs Chaucer book... )

I'm translating as I go ( the Barrie book ). Not an easy book to read, mind you...

WV=fooment...?

Unspoken said...

I liked this line: a throaty serenade of sweaty obscenities,

throaty serenade, sweat and obscenities all at once--I wouldn't think to put these words together in a million years. And you do that every time you write. Unexpected words right next to each other :).

JeffScape said...

Oh, man...

I need to know what a "bazfaz" is!

Tom said...

'bazz fazz' came from the old Pogo comic strips...sort of a mild expletive....so there...kind of out of context, but kindof not?

thanx y'all. 'appy Sunday!

Baino said...

Bazfaz dip? Sounds like a ballroom dancing manouvre. Snails keep the class clean!