Sunday, May 16, 2010

another nite cometh

In the tranquil moments of the dusk
before the quails wake and peck on our windows
our iron clad windows, shuttered against the violence
we sit still holding hands
some of us pray
some sing sweet songs remembered from our youth
others sit in corners and hug their bodies
folding in upon themselves
and whisper
and bargain
their fears entrenched
buried deep they are soulless
down to a cellular level they feel nothing but the heavy clicks
of heavy beaks
of momentous clicking and clucking
like the striking of a bell
an hour
the peal of unending terror
they rub skin raw
with worry
and smash their palms into reddening eye sockets
bloody tears staining pallid cheeks
for even in the light of day
they fear the coming of the night
and the foraging quails
peering, their eyeballs black
subterranean like wellsprings
where the little children drown
and only swim up at night
to tap tap tap
on windowpanes
entreating
grinning with shiny teeth
and they cry
we are lonely
Joseph
we are sad
Annie
come out and play
with us.



13 comments:

Brian Miller said...

oh, i wanna come out and play....

ArtSparker said...

There's a little of M.R. James' "Lost Souls" in this.

Unspoken said...

Ahhhh, nice one. I wanted more of this. LOVED the art. Wish you would post it bigger. Have you ever tried the new editor for picture posting? There is an extra large option. I use it for pictures only, as I still prefer the original editor at blogger.

Baino said...

Creepy. I was wondering where you'd go with this. The last time I saw quails they were nicely roasted in a red wind jus . .

Scary little children. Could explain my toddlerphobia! Great piece though Tom you're really exploring different ways of expressing yourself and each is working so well.

Tom said...

thanks--i've had a bit of trouble producing this kind of thing lately, but i finally got one out...creepy as it is

Mike said...

I like this style for you! It is a lot easier for me, anyway! I was thinking Poe while I was reading.

Ekanthapadhikan said...

A really nice time to go out and play!

And something about your poem - it was the longest one without a pause I've ever read.

Reya Mellicker said...

This is so beautiful. Oh the realms of insomnia, of deep night. Incredible.

As for George Clooney, I am not a fan. He's too cynical for me. Nice to know he can act, though.

Tom said...

thanks Reya...it's a little edgy...maybe not for bedtime reading, eh?

Ekan...my poetic-unpause isn't as long as your name, wow...or the name of your city...wow wow

Tess Kincaid said...

Ooo...nice and dark....like coffee and chocolate.

human being said...

soft... dark... full of voices... and beautiful... like night!


also loved your drawing... that double existence... above and below... like us all humans...

Tom said...

thanks!

JeffScape said...

Wait, wait, wait... there's more to this story in your head somewhere, and I want it now!

Very... disturbing. A return to form, I see. ;)