Tuesday, June 23, 2009

In lieu of a thought…


Qhagus dons a fair trophy
Flapping like clapping hands,
Well it is--
A string of fine fingers,
A string of fancy rich fingers
Groomed and polite
Gilded, ringed, studded in gems
And pointing to the source of gravity,
A grave predicament, chinking amiably.
,
Ahoy, a fiery exchange
The grapeshot, the
lugubrious pause
Stoic in limbo.
Now his blade unsheathed
Muscles bunched on a spring.
,
Asea here
on the periphery
Trundling the sprits
It’s a moot dinghy
Flung about on waves
Adrift--a mere shadow
In the wide expanse
Of a drunken, cola,
Molassen sea.
,
Rowers choke on a
Scullery wet suit knave
Groping, pulling tossed
Under inky blackness.
Asea Quagus
Wields a fair talisman,
Cleaving all, blazing
A bloody route into
Propinquity;
The twitching hordes.
,
Grasping a hewn
Lumber rail
He vaults over bloodslick
Planks wading deeper
Into carnage,
His long appendage
Biting into nameless
Foes, slack and pale
Faces--they die homeless,
Abrupt, fingers curling
Reaching to their
Fleeing souls:
Bargained for promises and lost.

19 comments:

Brian Miller said...

oh, love a good pirate story. on with the floggings!

Anonymous said...

AARRRR! Ye have been shanghied me 'earty! Avast ye! Swab up all this blood thar, lest I be gettin' on me boots ye son of a cur! AARRRRR! and AARRR some more!

Fun tale, Tom! Sorry, I just couldn't help meself! ARR!

Candie said...

Love it!The tale and the illustrations as usual!:)

Anonymous said...

And arrr! Wotta mighty big sword ye have, martar! Avast!

Anonymous said...

Hi Tom!

I like your imagery- those fingers dripping with rings.

Subby you crack me up!

mulderjoe said...

Wait, that was about pirates...?

Anonymous said...

@Cinnamon-Arrr! Be it sumptin' I sayd, lass? LOL!

Dot-Com said...

What a fun story!

Baino said...

Tom, Tom, Tom, Sweet cabin boy . . I've been reading you for a while know and just as I think I've 'got it' you put a mad doodle in that totally confuses me. I so got the dude with the sword . . but the last one . . clearly I am a visual person . .or thick . .or both . .or confused! Er yep, all of the above.

Reya Mellicker said...

The opposable thumb - curse and blessing, isn't it? Especially with our big ole cerebral cortices. What were the gods thinking?

Tom said...

Hey Baino...
sometimes i just throw in an extra doodle for fun...sorry to confuse more than ordinary.
Subby...you are very ornery...are you having fun behaving like a pirate?
Hey Reya...i am coming to the conclusion that the gods were just playing around and have put us to the side for more interesting toys...

Anonymous said...

Tom, who ye be callin' an "ornery" pyrate? Them's duelin' words! Haaaarrr! Dawn on the poop-deck, at ten paces; with serated bananas yet!

Tom said...

ooh...my banana's looking a little mushy...think i need to put into port for a new bunch.

Anonymous said...

Arrr! That's too bad ye swab!O wayt ( turns to cabin boy ); bring me my "secret weapons", haaarrrr!( cabin boy returns post haste; hands small oblong box to pyrate captain ); "Here ya go guv'nor...er..ah min cap'n!" ( scurries off to the bilge )

Haarrr, choose your weapon, lubber!

Box contains a pair of pretzel rods...

Tom said...

ow! That's rubbing salt in the wound.

Mrsupole said...

I am just sitting back waiting to see who wins the battle. I think I have been looking for my brain and can see why I am suffering with a migraine today. My darn brain has a hole in it and I did not know. No wonder I cannot get the pain to go away.

I love the doodles, but this battle going on is pretty good too.

God bless.

Anonymous said...

Tom, remember...he's a pirate captain. Bribe him! And I think Mrsupole's on to us! I'm off to write another sea shanty( I'm way over-due for one )....

Tom said...

...next we will do battle on your turf...to be continued, scurvy dog.

Anonymous said...

Aye, ye got moxie after all! Me hates moxie! How can anybody drink that stuff?!? Come prepared knave! Anon, I'll throwout th' gauntlet...aarrr!