Monday, July 16, 2012

setting fire to slippery slopes


He left for the hills the night of a thousand lights
As the families stood in the streets
Rooted like vegetables ripe for the harvest
It was like a bad movie, he lacked the recognition
An ocular strain as the road lengthened then expanded
To the point of fruition and the lights loomed with expectation
Growing, colliding and sparking as they neared
And the people stared with abject intrepidity
Resigned to their fate
He ran, alone through the ranks
Climbing scrub and scree
Slipping, tripping, dripping in fear
As the thousand lights or more bombarded town
And rushed in, a hot knife through butter
A match to kindling, tinder to smoke, smoke to dust
He neared the summit as the lights neared
Parting the terrain, laying waste to the crackling
And it grew, rushing upward in a chimney gust
And it grew, the soot, encapsulating his post
While he watched them pass
Growing silent in the dark,
A spark on the horizon, then nothing
But heat as  flames gain the peak

6 comments:

Brian Miller said...

so the heat is starting to get to you...maybe you should write on cooler topics till it passes...smiles.

Baino said...

Running in bushfire terri tory again? I've seen that happen actually, quite terrifying

Siobhan said...

I really love the image of scrambling up the scree, I know it well.

PattiKen said...

I really liked this. There are so many strong images. And this -- "abject intrepidity' -- is a wonderful yin-and-yang of a phrase.

Coffee Messiah said...

Excellent = Cheers!
My head hurts it's been hot/humid for so long ; (

flux biota. said...

i enjoyed this one. very lovely.