
I'm smoking you
like some distorted twig
that I drew with my toes in the sand.
That singular day
on an earthbound cloud
when the water was hot
hot as our bodies
only hotter
and we swam with the sharks
circling below
we swam so deep and
bird island was beyond our strokes
though it looked so near.
I left my sketchpad on the blanket
and the roots
like inverted candelabras
took hold while we swam
as the cold Caribbean tiger sharks coasted
we floated on our backs
languid
laughing
at the commotion of the birds
the locomotion and aerial tumult.
Gentle waves tossed we two
into a sandy nest
beneath the shade
of charcoal branches
and I smoked you
in a fever
under shivering shadow twigs
we flickered in and out.
like some distorted twig
that I drew with my toes in the sand.
That singular day
on an earthbound cloud
when the water was hot
hot as our bodies
only hotter
and we swam with the sharks
circling below
we swam so deep and
bird island was beyond our strokes
though it looked so near.
I left my sketchpad on the blanket
and the roots
like inverted candelabras
took hold while we swam
as the cold Caribbean tiger sharks coasted
we floated on our backs
languid
laughing
at the commotion of the birds
the locomotion and aerial tumult.
Gentle waves tossed we two
into a sandy nest
beneath the shade
of charcoal branches
and I smoked you
in a fever
under shivering shadow twigs
we flickered in and out.
12 comments:
Wonderful piece Tom!
~robert
"and the roots
like inverted candelabras"
"and I smoked you"
yep, you blew me right over with this one. look at the corn fly.
ps...that is one SUPER doodle.
Robert, thanks. I try.
Liza-thanks for commenting on the doodle. I think it's a hungry moon
i smoked you and we flickered in and out...so just what were you smoking...smiles.
BEST image EVER: "and the roots
like inverted candelabras".
Eat head eat tail eat head eat tail. This piece is like this. Your image, too, right? Wish I could see it while I typed in this little box.
xo
erin
haha. thanks Erin. cool reaction.
nah Brian. i don't smoke anything. not even a little bit.
i'm boring
Strange interlude.
and the roots
like inverted candelabras.
I'm in agreement, a beautifully visual sentence. hungry poem.
for now on i am looking at inanimate objects merely as metaphors.
Love the drawing...
But now I'm trying to figure out if you're literally smoking somebody.
Hmm... time to check the missing persons reports in your area.
Drink the metaphors as if they are wine.
languid is The Word for my weekend
this looks like something that crept out of the Looking glass
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